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NTwarrior

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PostSubject: My animation   My animation EmptySat Apr 12, 2008 6:48 am

Here's an animation I made My animation 37158
http://profile.imageshack.us/user/ntwarrior67/images/detail/#86/flamekickmovievm9.swf

Yes i'm not so good My animation 285849 But i tried My animation 749811
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptySat Apr 12, 2008 7:59 am

Thats cool, except when he jumps he goes way lower than he was XD.
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptySat Apr 12, 2008 8:03 am

Yeah, tons of resizing, but not bad. How long have ya been animating?
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptySat Apr 12, 2008 9:55 am

i thought it was well done, except for the resizing which bident mentioned, as did issac. i liked how you did the 360 turn and how when he landed his legs landed in like a ninja pose. The running was a bit choppy, but thats probly one of the hardest things to do when you're just learning. ONce again, good job.
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptySat Apr 12, 2008 12:03 pm

I know. I like to zoom in but they havent got a bigger brush size My animation 285849
Also he gets smaller, and then smaller again, My animation 688212
Thanks for the comments though. My animation 37158

Bident wrote:
Yeah, tons of resizing, but not bad. How long have ya been animating?
With flash a few days but I've used a site called Benettonplay which a sort of flash animation only on a website. I use pivot also which i made my avatar with :3 My animation 541342
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptySat Apr 12, 2008 2:38 pm

Pretty good then. Keep it up.
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptySun Apr 13, 2008 5:46 am

I made another, its much better than my first one. My animation 37158
http://img297.imageshack.us/my.php?image=polevaultingtv5.swf
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptySun Apr 13, 2008 8:51 am

Much better dude, just way to many trails lol.
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptySun Apr 13, 2008 9:04 am

Well, it was definetly better than the first one, and overall was well done for one of your very first anims. I just have one question though. Why did he skip instead of run? im jw, though you made the effects of this very nice. Also, when he jumps over the umm..big thing jutting in the sky... maybe he could like flip over it. And also, on the landing the effects were nice, but the entire thing seemed kinda repetive and mechanical. I think this had to do with the fact that he never ran but skipped. But this one guys opinion, and overall i think you did a very nice job.
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptySun Apr 13, 2008 12:18 pm

I can't make them run properly. My animation 405796
He wasent exactly skipping but yeah it does look like he is doing that. I thought it was alot of trails to but, I'll make another and see how it turns out with the information you have said
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptySun Apr 13, 2008 5:22 pm

NTwarrior wrote:
I can't make them run properly. My animation 405796
He wasent exactly skipping but yeah it does look like he is doing that. I thought it was alot of trails to but, I'll make another and see how it turns out with the information you have said
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Thanks for the comments. My animation 769786

NP, cant wait to c the new version!!
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptyWed Apr 16, 2008 3:40 am

I just have a problem with making a background, the mountains i drew can't be filled, and the ones that are filled always go infront of the animation. My animation 127980

EDIT: here it is so far.
http://img522.imageshack.us/my.php?image=polevaulting2bd1.swf :another:I know I'm loving it My animation 717736
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptyWed Apr 16, 2008 2:27 pm

It's ok, major resizing again.
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptyWed Apr 16, 2008 3:41 pm

NIce background, and nicely redone (so far). The only thing is there is pauses between the "skips" kinda defeat the purpose of a fast run to vault over the thing jutting in the sky. If you fix that, u'll have urself a nice animation right there, so keep it up. And resizing like Bident said.
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptyWed Apr 16, 2008 5:50 pm

The trails look wierd. lol
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptyThu Apr 17, 2008 12:12 am

Resising is weird because everytime i make someone run they shrink. =/

Here is the finished one anyway. http://img231.imageshack.us/my.php?image=polevaulting2sk9.swf

I had to make him get bigger at the end so it would loop. My animation 405796 My animation 127980
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptyThu Apr 17, 2008 6:17 am

Still tons of resizing, the sounds could have been better too.
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptyFri Apr 18, 2008 12:18 am

I don't have much sounds, and those where the only 2 sounds that sounded real to what I put into my animation. My animation 405796
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptyFri Apr 18, 2008 7:29 am

I have over 5,800 sounds. My animation 541342 I could lend you some.
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptyFri Apr 18, 2008 11:43 am

Downloads section, check it out.
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptySat Apr 19, 2008 1:29 am

I can't download off Megaupload. I dunno why it dont work. My animation 688212
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptySat Apr 19, 2008 8:03 am

Yeah, I was wondering too. Do you have make an account or what? I see no button
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptySat Apr 19, 2008 11:12 am

I made an account ages ago. downloaded that downloader. and nothing works. My animation 745102
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PostSubject: Re: My animation   My animation EmptyTue Jun 03, 2008 2:33 am

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