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Bident
Posts : 607
Join date : 2008-03-29
Location : United States
 | | Subject: First Combo Sat Apr 12, 2008 8:34 am | |
| This honestly my first finished combo test. Don't complain about it being short. Just tell me some main things I should work on. From a bit ago though... http://www.swfme.com/view/126034230 Fps. A couple days to make. Major on and off. | |
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Fuzzy
Posts : 59
Join date : 2008-04-12
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: First Combo Sat Apr 12, 2008 8:46 am | |
| It's a little bit slow even if its 30 fps lol
I like the sword and the "Line" :s behind it (Bad english)
The bag look odd when he kicks.
Anyways good job | |
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Bident
Posts : 607
Join date : 2008-03-29
Location : United States
| | Subject: Re: First Combo Sat Apr 12, 2008 8:48 am | |
| Lol, they're called trails. What do you mean bag? | |
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Fuzzy
Posts : 59
Join date : 2008-04-12
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: First Combo Sat Apr 12, 2008 9:01 am | |
| yes when hes kicking, the bag is kinda frosen | |
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Bident
Posts : 607
Join date : 2008-03-29
Location : United States
| | Subject: Re: First Combo Sat Apr 12, 2008 9:19 am | |
| - Fuzzy wrote:
- yes when hes kicking, the bag is kinda frosen
What do you mean bag...  Makes no sense. | |
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Polly-Wants-An-Uzi
Posts : 29
Join date : 2008-04-11
Location : Wisconsin
| | Subject: Re: First Combo Sat Apr 12, 2008 9:44 am | |
| The back leg (when he kicks) should probly bend, other wise it looks pretty nice for a first... good job man. | |
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Bident
Posts : 607
Join date : 2008-03-29
Location : United States
| | Subject: Re: First Combo Sat Apr 12, 2008 9:52 am | |
| It does bend... But thanks anyway. | |
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Moppy
Admin
Posts : 396
Join date : 2008-03-29
Location : Inside of your cats stomach.
| | Subject: Re: First Combo Sat Apr 12, 2008 10:20 pm | |
| Dont double frame, it makes it look bad. | |
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BluntAnims
Admin
Posts : 201
Join date : 2008-03-29
Age : 32
Location : At Moppy's house Fapping To our Pr0n's
| | Subject: :supersmile: Sun Apr 13, 2008 2:21 am | |
| ah .........ok first of all, when you punch, kick, move, etc. your body doesnt stay in the same place while your arm moves. when you punch and kick in real life, yea your leg and arms move, but the body also moves with the leg, arm, etc, so try and make the whole body move next time.  | |
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BluntAnims
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Posts : 201
Join date : 2008-03-29
Age : 32
Location : At Moppy's house Fapping To our Pr0n's
| | Subject: Re: First Combo Sun Apr 13, 2008 2:41 am | |
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Sick
Posts : 61
Join date : 2008-04-01
| | Subject: Re: First Combo Sun Apr 13, 2008 4:12 am | |
| Its looks good The kick looks awkward but and try making it a bit faster | |
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Bident
Posts : 607
Join date : 2008-03-29
Location : United States
| | Subject: Re: First Combo Sun Apr 13, 2008 7:25 am | |
| Thanks everybody, I'll really try to use your critiques and such. PS- I'll be starting The Element Collab soon.  | |
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Moppy
Admin
Posts : 396
Join date : 2008-03-29
Location : Inside of your cats stomach.
| | Subject: Re: First Combo Sun Apr 13, 2008 9:39 pm | |
| - BluntAnims wrote:
 Wow. Btw link doesnt work for me anymore. | |
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Rx00worth
Posts : 137
Join date : 2008-06-02
Location : Ya face.
| | Subject: Re: First Combo Tue Jun 03, 2008 9:27 pm | |
| 30 fps?  thats crazeh | |
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