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Bebosis
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Join date : 2008-03-30
Location : washington not d.c.
 | | Subject: 3 pretty basic tests Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:52 pm | |
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Bident
Posts : 607
Join date : 2008-03-29
Location : United States
| | Subject: Re: 3 pretty basic tests Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:56 pm | |
| Pretty good the main things I say would be to work on are Wobblyness, Choppiness, Easing and physics but yeah not that bad. | |
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Injin
Posts : 226
Join date : 2008-03-30
| | Subject: Re: 3 pretty basic tests Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:58 pm | |
| Well they all need a lot of work but, I'm guessing your pretty new to flash so it's to be expected. The punch looks weird because it's not a punch. It's more of a overhead swing. Do the motion yourself and then try and draw the stick in the same position as you are. In the kick, the stick is leaning to far forward and the movement is too fast. He should build up the power for the kick, snap the kick, and the have the kick hang out for a little bit (like 3-4 frames at 16) before coming back to a normal stance. The run is just messed up. Watch an animation fbf to learn how a run is supposed to look and then develop your own based off of that.
Those are all specific crits but, there are a few "blanket statements" that apply to all your anims.
1. They need anticipation
2. " " force
3. Work on wobbliness
4. Try and animate more realistic movements
They aren't bad for beginning but, you can improve a lot. Keep practicing :] | |
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Garrett
Posts : 84
Join date : 2008-04-06
Age : 32
Location : United States of America
| | Subject: Re: 3 pretty basic tests Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:42 pm | |
| Pretty choppy and the drawings are kinda bad, but keep trying. | |
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Sick
Posts : 61
Join date : 2008-04-01
| | Subject: Re: 3 pretty basic tests Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:54 pm | |
| Their alrifht. Fbf some anims/ | |
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Moppy
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Join date : 2008-03-29
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| | Subject: Re: 3 pretty basic tests Wed Apr 09, 2008 6:08 pm | |
| I suggest adding heads.  | |
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Bebosis
Posts : 24
Join date : 2008-03-30
Location : washington not d.c.
| | Subject: Re: 3 pretty basic tests Wed Apr 09, 2008 8:52 pm | |
| like i said i added heads in the flash but the new file wouldnt upload onto antiup it was the same one | |
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Bhuggy
Posts : 28
Join date : 2008-03-30
Age : 29
Location : UK
| | Subject: Re: 3 pretty basic tests Thu Apr 10, 2008 6:40 am | |
| on the walking he looks like he doesn't want to step on something | |
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Rx00worth
Posts : 137
Join date : 2008-06-02
Location : Ya face.
| | Subject: Re: 3 pretty basic tests Tue Jun 03, 2008 9:39 pm | |
| good, just take more care into ur anims  | |
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NubbyGG
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Join date : 2008-06-01
Age : 30
Location : Australia
| | Subject: Re: 3 pretty basic tests Tue Jun 03, 2008 9:44 pm | |
| There all pretty bad, cant explain why but they are really choppy. Practise some more and show us so we could see if youve improved. | |
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Rx00worth
Posts : 137
Join date : 2008-06-02
Location : Ya face.
| | Subject: Re: 3 pretty basic tests Tue Jun 03, 2008 9:45 pm | |
| - NubbyGG wrote:
- There all pretty bad, cant explain why but they are really choppy. Practise some more and show us so we could see if youve improved.
aye, you were once like that..... | |
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Zackie
Posts : 77
Join date : 2008-05-07
| | Subject: Re: 3 pretty basic tests Wed Jun 04, 2008 12:30 am | |
| do not bump!, check the date | |
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Rx00worth
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| | Subject: Re: 3 pretty basic tests Wed Jun 04, 2008 2:41 am | |
| yea, ur right sorry everyone  | |
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